Dora Williams

Sophistication As the English teacher threw the essay at the student, the girl realized how she had betrayed her trusting teacher. She didn’t really know why she did it; perhaps it was a case of laziness and frustration. She recalled the night she wrote it, sitting frustrated in front of the computer trying to write something and get the essay in on time. Though it was no excuse. She eventually gave up and did …showed first 75 words of 732 total…

…showed last 75 words of 732 total…The use of commas increases and adjectives are used more frequently providing more description. These rhetorical devices accentuate Dora’s newfound sophistication. Like the student that learned a life lesson from her teacher, Dora’s lessons in life increase her sophistication and successes. As people grow older, the lessons they learned prior in life provide room for affluence and accomplishment. Masters used structure, diction, syntax and sentence patterns to articulate Dora’s sophistication. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ **Bibliography**